The Lunatic's Retreat

 Hi, It's Tommy again, I wasn't planning on revealing my project this soon but I sort of need a page to link to for when I ever find the right people to give my second draft of my first Visual Novel game's script. I've just finished what I would call a second draft of my game's script. So am linking to my second draft that I want feedback for and reverse outline I made from the original draft to help find my story beats, heard about this from a Reddit comment. The Waiting Game - drafts folder   I guess for the post I am going to explain what this game is about. It's a short oneshot story featuring two (three if you count the off screen character)  of  my Original Characters in waiting room having a talk with each other. one wants to leave but the other doesn't. It's not something am taking super seriously. This is meant to be a simple game to hopefully break my curse of never finishing anything. (aside drawings and blog posts I guess) As a result I purpo...

 Hello again! it's Tommy. RPG Maker Festival 2026 appeared in my Steam News feed and sparked my interest in game development again. Of course I would immediately write a short visual novel script for a completely DIFFERENT game engine entirely called RenPy. The reasons I chose to use that engine are the following. 1. I NEVER finished ANY of my past game dev projects. I got pretty close to something complete once but I long sense gave up on that one. So I decided to make a stance here. I HAVE TO FINISH A GAME before I can try harder projects. But on the topic of my Visual Novel game it's actually going pretty well. I used ChatGPT to give me a basic concept to write about and thus I made a short story about my two OCs talking in a hospital waiting room. I won't spoil much more about it expect for the fact this isn't really a canon universe am planning on using for these characters. The game is technically more of a short story then a game, in Visual Novel terms it would b...